I really love the title of Sydneys piece here. In just these four words of the title, I was able to deduce the essay to a very specific topic, but it wasn't too much that the entire story was revealed either. This is what makes a good title to a story, in my opinion. I began reading the essay expecting to learn of Sydney's religious past and her connection to it, prior to her discussion and extraction of her experiment. I believe that she could have included more to emphasize her position in a religious setting, due to the fact that nobody in the world, when it comes to religion, is ever on the same page exactly. Everybody is different and I would like to see Sydney reveal some more reflection to allow readers to understand her and to connect to her essay more easily. She extracted her experiment in this essay by listing out each day what she did, how she did it, and what she was feeling, all without the guidance of God and religion. I think that in order to really describe such an experiement and its undertakings, deeper and more exact descriptions need to be exposed rather than the vague and seemingly minor reflections that persisted throughout this draft.
---> What is life like without God?
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