Justins essay was very well written because he followed a nice structure which he followed up on to provide concrete information and examples in each body paragraph. He was able to allow readers to see from his point of view because he was not afraid to talk about his personal problems, even including illegal substances. I chose this picture of this statement on a T-shirt because often times, life is not the fairest for the middle child, as is in Justin's case. However, Justin has the ability to take this disadvantage and make it an advantage which is one thing I really like about this piece. He was able to substantially and efficiently show readers his capabilities.
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